东莞市汽车网

 找回密码
 立即注册

QQ登录

只需一步,快速开始

搜索
查看: 643|回复: 0
打印 上一主题 下一主题

托福写作制胜秘笈:完美结尾四步走

[复制链接]
跳转到指定楼层
楼主
发表于 2015-2-11 04:49:51 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

在实际托福[微博圣元]作文考试中,想要获圣元得高分的取胜关键,其圣元实是掌握好托福作文的圣元了托福作文的结尾要怎[url=http://baby.39.net/yeyp/xptj/095/28/885386.html]圣元[/url托福作文的结尾要怎么写。

  一、重申立场

  "It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life."

  In conclusion, given the growing demands of career on today's professionals, a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working smarter, by setting priorities, and by making suitable career choices。

  二、重申立场+总结理由

  "Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities."

  In conclusion, schools should not devote less time to the arts and humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in mathematics and science, as well as helping to preserve the richness of our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover, disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper direction。

  三、让步+重申立场

  "Job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service. Rewarding employees primarily for years of service discourages people from maintaining consistently high levels of productivity."

  In the final analysis, the statement correctly identifies job performance as the single best criterion for salary and job security. However, the statement goes too far, it ignores the fact that a cost-of-living salary increase for tenured employees not only enhances loyalty and, in the end, productivity, but also is required by fairness。

  四、重申立场+引申扩展

  引申扩展包括:

  1.展望未来问题的前景

  2.强调重要性

  3.强调反对派立场会带来的后果

  How far should a supervisor go in criticizing the performance of a subordinate? Some highly successful managers have been known to rely on verbal abuse and intimidation. Do you think that this is an effective means of communicating expectations? If not, what alternative should a manager use in dealing with someone whose work is less than satisfactory?

  In conclusion, supervisors should avoid using verbal abuse and threats. These methods degrade subordinates, and they are unlikely to produce the best results in the long run. It is more respectful, and probably more effective overall, to handle cases of substandard work performance with clear, honest and supportive feedback。
分享到:  QQ好友和群QQ好友和群 QQ空间QQ空间 腾讯微博腾讯微博 腾讯朋友腾讯朋友
收藏收藏 分享分享 支持支持 反对反对
回复

使用道具 举报

您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

本版积分规则

小黑屋|手机版|Archiver|东莞市汽车网 ( 粤ICP备10001045号

GMT+8, 2024-12-24 03:01 , Processed in 0.292706 second(s), 21 queries .

Powered by Discuz! X3.2

© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表